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Angels of Russia - tony debonis - 03-28-2021
Angels of Russia
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Name of Faction: Angels of Russia
Number of Members(Minimum of 5): we have 9 and we are recruiting in chat with adverts
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): bratva
Ethnic Background (Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): russian | ukranian | tatar | bashkir |
Your Discord # (ex: uncle speeed#7871 discord to our faction: https://discord.gg/TkUS4dBm
Organization Backstory (Min. of 150+ Words):
Good evening my name is Trivoski Gopnik
this is my bratva story
11:40pm | Father Vladkov my father, was leaving the old decaying church after a long day of confessions and prayers . A smart dressed Italian made man with black combed hair by passing the church says in Russian (ego prosto business)
proceeding to pull the Triger of a berretta m1923 and leaving my father laying on the gravel with six holes in his stomach.
My father was the pakhan of the Angels of Russia and as his days came to an end, my time came to take his place as the pakhan of the bratva.
my name is Trivoski Gopnik, I am 5ft, 45 years of age and and am a relatively patient man. I love my vodka and money, that's enough about me.
1980s | flight 298 Russia Moscow to America newYork
As i landed at the land of freedom, I later found a old catholic church and i will admit it i was fond of this 1800s lookin church it was rather a silver grey stoned dark church, In the center back of the church was a big Cross with a wooden table in front with a candle holder that held four lit candles, with two separate rows of seats a confession booth was infront of them all, I purchased this church for little money.... as i say little money $150k may seem rather expensive but you see these Americans are not so smart with money they will spend there life earnings on a decorated wholesome wedding just to get divorced 2 years later, So the point i am making is i made that money back in four months of purchase.
Whilst i am the priest of the church, Angels of Russia men are running illegal substances to the civilians and illegal firearms to the other Russian bratvas, we later met up with a very powerful bratva know as Kaprov Bratva to sit down and make a business arrangement firearms for American currency,
FIVE MONTHS LATER
We have been supplying our alliance with firearm's for about five months now and they introduced us to there great friends Docheski Bratva, We initially made the same business arrangement to sell fire arms through the church to them.
As problems came from the night Skye between the Italians and Russians the pakhans and Italian bosses all sat down and made an agreement to leave each other alone.
A Italian made man shot up my church and later was hanged off world corp by the Angels of Russia.
As things started to heat up we needed more firearms from our contact in Ukraine so we started a side business for the lower ranking Angel men, Selling illegal substances to civilians and addicts.
The illegal substances was making us so much money we could not only supply our alliances but our own family.
1980 September 21st
One early morning I Trivoski got a phone call from a Russian spy that a Italian family was planning to shoot our church and kill the Jews and Russian catholic men. So the Angels of Russia armed up with ak47s and drove there white vans disguised as mail delivery men to the Italian restaurant eight Russians masked up jump out of the disguised van and unleash 7.62×39mm rounds through the restaurant killing three Italian made men and leaving a black fedora as a hint that the Angels of Russia did the shooting.
so if you would learn one thing from this story is don't mess with Russians........
We are gonna purchase church if our application is accepted
to run our faction as efficient as we can we would ask if we can have weed bricks as our illegal substance
and a level three gun racket
thank you guys
thank you guys
RE: Angels of Russia - wackyTiger - 03-28-2021
Terrible faction application. It included the following:
- Terrible backstory that makes no sense
- Horrific grammatical errors
- No true reason for them to be a crime family other than “they just are”
- Only has 3 members even though 5 members are the minimum to apply as a faction
- Someone already owns the church, meaning no one else is allowed to declare it is theirs
- Your faction backstory doesn’t explain why they do gun racketeering or how they obtained the “A grade” weapons
- Your application, mainly the backstory, has little to no detail.
I don’t care about the “roleplay possibilities” your faction can have. Gun racketeering is REALLY boring, trust me I did it in another faction.
-1
RE: Angels of Russia - tony debonis - 03-28-2021
Hello wacky
you replied to my post saying grammatical errors
no reason to be crime family
back story doesnt make sense
first of all church is not owned as there is no name or whitelisted faction on church so we can get it given or if its on auction house we can purchase it , it actually says why they do gun racketeering ( to supply russian contacts with illegal firearms )
what they do is illegal ( gun racketeering ) that is why they are a crime family committing a crime distributing illegal firearms with out licenses to crime family's that will pursue crimes with weaponry we supplied.
we have 4 members now and still are recruiting in server adverts so thats okay
our back story has info and detail that is needed to understand we are criminals that are suppling illegal weapons to crime family's that intend to use weaponry harmfully when needed
it would have been boring gun racketeering for you because you wouldn't have had past experiences being a boss in anything and your efforts to gun racketeer would have been critically poor
and please stay out of peoples comment sections if you have no real facts or -3 rep
thanks wacky
-Gopnik
RE: Angels of Russia - Luca - 03-28-2021
The Church is owned by a faction if you would check the Property Catalouge
RE: Angels of Russia - tony debonis - 03-28-2021
yes thank you sir
i have contacted admin and i am gonna msg the man that owns church and buy it if its for sale
would be appreciated very much if this was accepted as not only would it add another russian family , you could always confess a sin to father gopnik
RE: Angels of Russia - wackyTiger - 03-28-2021
(03-28-2021, 03:56 PM)tony debonis Wrote: Hello wacky
you replied to my post saying grammatical errors
no reason to be crime family
back story doesnt make sense
first of all church is not owned as there is no name or whitelisted faction on church so we can get it given or if its on auction house we can purchase it , it actually says why they do gun racketeering ( to supply russian contacts with illegal firearms )
what they do is illegal ( gun racketeering ) that is why they are a crime family committing a crime distributing illegal firearms with out licenses to crime family's that will pursue crimes with weaponry we supplied.
we have 4 members now and still are recruiting in server adverts so thats okay
our back story has info and detail that is needed to understand we are criminals that are suppling illegal weapons to crime family's that intend to use weaponry harmfully when needed
it would have been boring gun racketeering for you because you wouldn't have had past experiences being a boss in anything and your efforts to gun racketeer would have been critically poor
and please stay out of peoples comment sections if you have no real facts or -3 rep
thanks wacky
-Gopnik
I thank you for the feedback on the response, and I do admit (and apologize) to a majority of things said that were wrong. The only issue I generally had with the whole faction is that all they did was gun racketeering, and if you continue doing that for a long period of time then the job gets boring and makes faction. members either want to leave or do a different job in the faction.
You can continue the same objective, it’s not my faction so I don’t care what you do with it. My suggestion is that you add a couple of side jobs to do for lower ranked members to do before committing themselves into gun racketeering, and attempt to put your own twist into it unless you want to make it really repetitive.
RE: Angels of Russia - JimmyPenis - 03-28-2021
-1 tho we need more diversity in this server this faction app bores me. Their are 2 bratvas in the server and both set the bar fairly high. Id reccomend reading more into ruissian mobs and other faction apps. Here is a pretty prime example. https://divergenetworks.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=1031. Try expanding on it and then youd have not only more community support but you will have a greater chance of being accepted
RE: Angels of Russia - tony debonis - 03-28-2021
yes will do sir
RE: Angels of Russia - Chonky Poo - 03-29-2021
-1 You really need to get the app to look a bit better in a Russian "Bratva" There may be a boss but within the org, he is not known as the boss you based what you said on how you're going to make the business such as doing guns but if there are no gun rackets open then your plan would have gone down the drain completely you also said in your application that you were a crime family but Bratva is the root word for brotherhood meaning there should be no "Family" involved with it if you're going to start a Russian crime family it would work but a Russian bratva that does things like a crime family over all doesn't make sense please make your application a bit larger talk more about the back bone of the faction and I may change my response.
RE: Angels of Russia - tony debonis - 03-31-2021
I have retyped my whole application gave more detail to our family, what we do, who we supply and who we are against,
altogether we have fixed and polished our story if you could take five minutes to read and drop a like that would be lovely thank you