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Dons. Application - Don j. Trumpet - 01-19-2022
Name of Faction: Coalman Sachs
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Finicial Services, Business, small group of elites
Ethnic Background (Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): American/Canadian
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): i banged ur mom#1153
Your SteamID: Steam ID: 76561199010176397
Your Faction Discord link (If you have one): (still under development)
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): Im Don j. Trumpet, a Public defender who has made a reasonable amount of money gambling, and working defending clients, I've studied finance along with law, and always wanted to make investments, ive studied funds, security's and derivatives for years and now feel it is time to create a Defining corporation. id like to offer several services such as insurance, Banking/loans, investment Services, and a bond market to create profit, jobs, and respectable business infulstructure.
RE: Dons. Application - Hoovis - 01-19-2022
-1, This application seems very low effort, and you also didn't get even close to the required word count.
RE: Dons. Application - Fish Man - 01-19-2022
-1
Doesn't even follow the basic word requirements, Along with a really low quality application
RE: Dons. Application - TheDroppedFry - 01-19-2022
-1 for now, I am pretty sure a requirement for being a lawyer is having good knowledge of spelling and grammar, as well as understanding guidelines. You need to meet the minimum word requirement, and you should consider elaborating more on your history as well as what SPECIFICALLY you offer.
Dons. Application - Pendred - 01-21-2022
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is suffcient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.