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Faction Application - Oryn - 03-26-2022
Name of Faction: Red Right Hand
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Bratva
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Russian
Server Preference (Miami or New York): Miami
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): Oryn#1751
Your SteamID: STEAM_0:1:48783045
Your Server playtime: 1 Day and 22 hours
Your Faction Discord link (If you have one): https://discord.gg/8BaUUPBMrB
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words) : https://docs.google.com/document/d/17QeIkcsINjhL-jAb7NoCQNva9Ha3nZW9UgU3W1uMfrQ/edit?usp=sharing
RE: Faction Application - Lammy - 03-26-2022
-1/+1, Neutral. Backstory is okay. But it needs to be a bit more expanded. Just work on the backstory.
RE: Faction Application - Vex - 03-26-2022
-1
The overall application is lacking creativity/effort. The idea for the faction is not really ideal, especially for this genre.
RE: Faction Application - mugzalot - 03-26-2022
Neutral
With the updated backstory it sounds interesting but the lack of play time impacts the chance of this faction Succeeding, Especially in Miami if you dont already have some money saved up for auctions or to even purchase flat out properties from other people etc. As an Ex Co-Leader of Solonski Bratva I would like to see another Russian Mob around but the pressure of running one is high.
RE: Faction Application - TheDroppedFry - 03-26-2022
+/-1, I'll hold my opinion for now, would like to see current members contribute to the server RP-wise first.
RE: Faction Application - catgoku22 - 03-27-2022
+1 could use a better backstory and more effort, but a bratva is a good addition to the server
RE: Faction Application - kash - 03-28-2022
-1
same thing stretch/vex said
RE: Faction Application - Oryn - 03-28-2022
(03-26-2022, 03:37 AM)Vex Wrote: -1
The overall application is lacking creativity/effort. The idea for the faction is not really ideal, especially for this genre.
I will admit I did rush through this and I will completely revise the story in a more appropriate fashion and I’m disappointed in myself for not throughout thinking the story through the next revision will be better to understand and I will put more effort into it!
RE: Faction Application - Canadian-bacon - 04-06-2022
Doesn't seem unique and user has been inactive for a week+
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is suffcient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.