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The Montorello Crime Family - BallzInYoTonsils - 08-14-2022
Name of Faction: The Coreno Crime Family
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc):
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Italian
Server Preference (UnionCity or SouthSide): Union City
Your Discord #: SheFwScarlo#1113
Your SteamID: STEAM_0:0:712043947
Your Server playtime: I just came back to this server, my old account is gone as i got a new pc and no longer have access to the steam account I originally played on, but i've been here since omerta networks.
Your Faction Discord link (If you have one): https://discord.gg/z8m9vCjz
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): Vincent Coreno Was born in Brooklyn, New York 1943 to a poor mother and an abusive father, after serving in Vietnam he returned into the civilian world he turned towards violence, then making money by extortion, selling drugs etc. Years later he'd meet up with a guy known as Frank Cicero who tony would later take under his wing, the duo would then form a group known as The Coreno Crime Family, they'd go on to make money however they can in New York doing things such as selling guns, drugs, stolen property, cars and more. They now operate in Union City, New York.
RE: The Montorello Crime Family - Canadian-bacon - 08-14-2022
Read the application status. Open for UNION applicants only
RE: The Montorello Crime Family - BallzInYoTonsils - 08-14-2022
(08-14-2022, 08:43 PM)Canadian-bacon Wrote: Read the application status. Open for UNION applicants onlyFixed it, my bad didn't even notice the application status.
RE: The Montorello Crime Family - CharlesSKS - 08-15-2022
-1 Changing the name of the faction and editing the SMALL and POORLY WORDED backstory constantly.
RE: The Montorello Crime Family - Guitar Guy - 08-15-2022
-1 By far the most minimal backstory I've seen. Take a look at some other apps and work on making yours more well rounded.
RE: The Montorello Crime Family - chadvini - 08-16-2022
-1. This app looks like it was made by somebody with 40 minutes of server playtime. Backstory sounds like every Italian gangster backstory there ever was.
RE: The Montorello Crime Family - Canadian-bacon - 09-07-2022
Applicant has not logged on in 3 weeks
The Montorello Crime Family - Canadian-bacon - 09-07-2022
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.