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The Camaleon Cartel - chunkeyman69 - 10-12-2022
Name of Faction: The Camaleon Cartel
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 16
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Cartel
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Hispanic
Server Preference (UnionCity or SouthSide): Unioncity or if southside is open
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): Big D#0471
Your SteamID: 76581199231522084
Your Server playtime: 30 hours
Your Faction Discord link (If you have one):
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): It starts in Mexico of a family of four, two parents and two brothers the family was really poor and needed money, the dad worked, and the mom was working. then the dad got sick, and the mom had to stay home to look after their dad. then the two brothers looked for work and came across a group of people and the two brothers did things for their family then the dad died from a sickness and the mom grow old and died from old age and the two brothers needed money and were continuing to do crimes and used the money to help each other and the two brothers were working for someone, and the two brothers wanted to go on their own and start their own crime organization.
RE: The Camaleon Cartel - savin0 - 10-12-2022
-1 bruh
RE: The Camaleon Cartel - String - 10-12-2022
-1 no app is bad
RE: The Camaleon Cartel - Jack Dent - 10-12-2022
COD Vanguard Zombies has a better plot than this shit... -1
RE: The Camaleon Cartel - Sal - 10-12-2022
+1
Backstory has me in tears, sobbing
RE: The Camaleon Cartel - String - 10-12-2022
nigga misspelled his faction's name -1
RE: The Camaleon Cartel - youngriff - 10-12-2022
-1 No effort
RE: The Camaleon Cartel - hopleyt - 10-12-2022
I love a good backstory not so fussy and spelling and grammar side of things as I'm not perfect either we didn't even hit the minimum word count in your backstory so I'm sorry but -1
RE: The Camaleon Cartel - Canadian-bacon - 10-14-2022
Poor app
Lowish play time
The Camaleon Cartel - Canadian-bacon - 10-14-2022
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.