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faction create - Bableves121 - 01-14-2023
Name of Faction:Hammer
Number of Members :6
Type Of Faction Street gang
Ethnic Background:hungray
Server Preference South side
Your Discord bangos_mangos#9914
Your SteamID:https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198957600110
Your Server playtime:3w 2d 5h
Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned and managed by the official DVN account? yes
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images):
Sorry story is: herefile:///C:/Users/PC/Downloads/There%20was%202%20kid%20in%20the%20Hammer%20family%20(1).docx
story:There was 2 kid in the Hammer family. There parents was killed by there close friends with a hammer in front of the 2 kids.The kids has grown up and still searching for that "close friends" in New York to get them and kill them with a hammer. as they grew up, we learned that the street is their "battleground". They realized that they had to protect the streets from other mafias.The gun is their friend. They can shoot with flawless accuracy. Their favorite place is Word corp, they are almost always there. They hate the police, they have bad memories with them.In the old days, when they were still poor, they only fought with hammers, but as they got more and more money, they switched to weapon. They moved out of New York for a while, but it was a bad idea. The place they went to was a war zone with lots of fighting. One Brother wants to be the king but the king is J. Jimm, born
name Jim hammer. The problem with that was that he was the best king in the world
. So they renounced the royal title. Their first fight was in Budapest. After this fight, Jimm J started to think about who to give the king's rank to because the king was already very old
. And that's how the two brothers came into being. As soon as they heard this, one of the brothers ran to the king to tell him that he would gladly take on the role. But the other brother stopped him because he was already very tired after this fight. After that, a very So he also moved to New York with Jimmy the king and they started to help his brother in illegal work
big fight would break out. One brother moved back to New York and the other went to be a king. Years passed, the brother who went back to New York started illegal work
. The other brother's life got worse and worse. They lost the battles one after another and their territory was already reduced to a very small size. So he renounced the royal title.
So he also moved to New York with Jimmy the king and they started to help his brother in illegal work
RE: faction create - CharlesSKS - 01-14-2023
-1 Low quality application
RE: faction create - Fox - 01-14-2023
-1 App is really basic and quite hard to read. And you link to a file stored on your machine lol
RE: faction create - Young Wallace - 01-14-2023
-1
The Hammer Family deserves a better application, I'd recommend getting an English friend to help re-write this post.
RE: faction create - Rayve - 01-15-2023
-1 very poorly written faction application
RE: faction create - Marzii - 01-15-2023
-1 poorly written
RE: faction create - Plixily - 01-15-2023
-1 not trying to be a asshole but wtf is this
RE: faction create - akimbocross - 01-15-2023
-1 aint no way
RE: faction create - TheGrimReefer - 01-17-2023
-1 id get a team/friend to help with grammar its ok if its not your first language but still needs to be readable
faction create - Canadian-bacon - 02-05-2023
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.