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Brako Amerika Grupa - akimbocross - 01-28-2023
Name of Faction: Brako Amerika Grupa
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Crime Clan
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Yugoslavian (Specifically) Serbian.
Server Preference (UnionCity or SouthSide): I Believe this is nulled due to UC getting removed, So obviously SouthSide.
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): King_Krokodil#1337
Your SteamID: 76561198393981159
Your Server playtime: Not gonna BS and say ‘Oh i’ve been playing since-’ or ‘Oh for about a-’, !time says 176 hours.
Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned and managed by the official DVN account? (Yes/No): Yes.
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M91TsiZdZg4gWDmsbRuA_K47QEZ4kgbYtY0roO9e56Y/edit?usp=sharing
RE: Brako Amerika Grupa - CharlesSKS - 01-28-2023
-1 Backstory is poor and needs to be more well written.
RE: Brako Amerika Grupa - akimbocross - 01-28-2023
(01-28-2023, 06:18 PM)CharlesSKS Wrote: -1 Backstory is poor and needs to be more well written.How do you mean?
RE: Brako Amerika Grupa - GuySaxophone - 01-28-2023
+1
I actually think the backstory is fine, I especially liked the inclusion of real Yugoslavian history, as that, along with the rest of the story seem realistic and I struggle to find a reason to make it even more interesting without sounding cheesy. Furthermore, he obviously has people helping and a Yugoslavian influence in the server isn't such a bad idea.
RE: Brako Amerika Grupa - Restless - 01-29-2023
+1
- Backstory was intense and made me want to see how a Yugoslavian faction would be to have around, it would give the city more depth and diversity.
- I really like the idea of the story and bringing that influence into the era MafiaRP is set in.
- The brutal manner that the backstory gave the faction would your actions feel like they have deeper felt consequences, making you feel the need to look over your shoulder when wandering the streets if you are trying to cross the Brako Amerika Grupa.
RE: Brako Amerika Grupa - BaIIzInYoTonsils - 01-29-2023
-1 Super Lackluster and generic
RE: Brako Amerika Grupa - akimbocross - 01-29-2023
(01-29-2023, 07:46 AM)BaIIzInYoTonsils Wrote: -1 Super Lackluster and genericWould you mind explaining how so? I Feel like this is because I left the same comment word-for-word on one of your faction applications and this is because of salt, which really isn’t the environment we want here, It’s really quite childish.
RE: Brako Amerika Grupa - BaIIzInYoTonsils - 01-29-2023
(01-29-2023, 04:50 PM)akimbocross Wrote:Oh i thought you were just a troll, my friend told me you go on peoples posts putting -1s on everyones shit, but from this response i guess you arent a troll like i originally thought(01-29-2023, 07:46 AM)BaIIzInYoTonsils Wrote: -1 Super Lackluster and genericWould you mind explaining how so? I Feel like this is because I left the same comment word-for-word on one of your faction applications and this is because of salt, which really isn’t the environment we want here, It’s really quite childish.
+1 Really good faction idea, and i like the backstory
RE: Brako Amerika Grupa - Canadian-bacon - 02-10-2023
Unfortunately this isn't something we're looking for at this time.
Thank you for your interest in taking the time to apply.
Brako Amerika Grupa - Canadian-bacon - 02-10-2023
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.