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The Vasilaki Crime Family - hanskapfer - 02-21-2023
Name of Faction: The Vasilaki Crime Family
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 9
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Family
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Greek,Greek american.
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): apple bee#8661 |Discord Server: https://discord.gg/MX8FmhVYfv
Your SteamID: STEAM_0:0:92505692
Your Server playtime: 3w 4d 23h 50m.
Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned and managed by the official DVN account? (Yes/No): Yes
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://docs.google.com/document/d/17jEtQImWMoDl3GRIqHgMj05uuwhw1li_gcXNynztyuo/edit?usp=sharing
RE: The Vasilaki Crime Family - CharlesSKS - 02-21-2023
-1 You have the player time, but the physical backstory is poorly worded and looks bland, and mentioning rackets can give the vibe of you asking for it.
RE: The Vasilaki Crime Family - NovaLuna - 02-22-2023
I want to give you a +1 because I really do want a Greek faction, but that backstory is too unpolished. I recommend spending an hour or so to give it perhaps a different font, get proper layouts for the images, and maybe expand upon your story.
(as well as fix all the painful grammar and spelling mistakes)
RE: The Vasilaki Crime Family - Spc369 - 02-22-2023
-1 guys are childish and uneducated overall, have no drive for RP nor can they add anything for the community at all. I would personally ban them all for being YouTubers attempting to bad rap everyone
RE: The Vasilaki Crime Family - TheSovietHamster - 02-22-2023
-1 for now I've talked with the founders of this faction and I've given them my advice, work on all aspects of the faction over the course of the next week, delete the original application, and garner more playtime and experience. I'd like to see a more refined version of what exists because it does have potential if enough work is put in. I hope to see improvement next week or the over the course of the month.
The Vasilaki Crime Family - Canadian-bacon - 03-24-2023
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.