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Maquisards de Châtellerault - Mr Goldstein - 03-26-2023
Name of Faction: Maquisards de Châtellerault
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 6 (but growing)
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Family / Organised Crime Syndicate
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): French
Name of Character running the faction: François "Le Roi" Leblanc
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): Pope Pius XIII#0001
Your SteamID: STEAM_0:1:155801952
Your Server playtime: I'm not sure how to check but I've been a member of Diverge since the beginning + in Mobsters Paradise. I have no life with over 9k hours on Gmod.
Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes
Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned and managed by the official DVN account? (Yes/No): Yes
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): Click me
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - NovaLuna - 03-26-2023
Hey! A French faction sounds cool-- but this application is very hard to read. I suggest going into the Accepted category and viewing some of the examples in there. Usually a Google Doc for the backstory is best. A good application is essential!
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - Fox - 03-26-2023
To find out your play time do !time in game
+ / - on this one.
I think it's a good idea and more diverse but the backstory leaves me a bit wanting. The first half is great but the second have is white generic.
I agree with NovaLuma, get a really nice Google doc going with a better flowing layout and I'd happily change to a +
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - Mr Goldstein - 03-26-2023
I apologise to you both. I had it written very clearly and concise but the forums made it difficult to read. I am unsure of how to amend it, but I will try.
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - Austin - 03-26-2023
+1 French faction would be great change of pace, considering it's not like any other ethnicity factions.
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - NovaLuna - 03-26-2023
(03-26-2023, 01:20 PM)Mr Goldstein Wrote: I apologise to you both. I had it written very clearly and concise but the forums made it difficult to read. I am unsure of how to amend it, but I will try.
I really like how you reformed it!
A +1 for me, but I do want to say that perhaps you should add more personality beyond the drug dealings/weapons smuggling of the faction. Perhaps a unique motivation for the leader, or change a bit of the background to put him into a unique situation.
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - Mr Goldstein - 03-26-2023
Do not worry! I do have other story motifs after he got to America however, they were unrelated to the backstory. I do have a full lore figured out including how my underboss got in business with me, but as said I just needed a way to get him to America from France!
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - W.W as Warren White ? - 04-01-2023
+1 The backstory seems fetched-out.
An european faction - other than the Italians and the Polish - would be a great addition to an already diverse roster.
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - Upir - 04-01-2023
+1 it's french accept this one
RE: Maquisards de Châtellerault - Josh - 04-27-2023
french faction is breath of fresh air from Italian snooze fest
You have a sound backstory, I'm excited (yippee)
Kind of like french thomas shelby tbh
+1