+- Diverge Networks (https://divergenetworks.com/forums)
+-- Forum: 1980s Mafia Roleplay (https://divergenetworks.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?fid=4)
+--- Forum: Faction Applications (https://divergenetworks.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?fid=22)
+---- Forum: Denied (https://divergenetworks.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?fid=28)
+---- Thread: Father Keller's Church (/showthread.php?tid=5737)
Father Keller's Church - PlainviewOil - 04-27-2023
Name of Faction: Father Keller's Church
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Religious group/Cult
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Multicultural
Name of Character running the faction: Joseph "The Priest" Keller
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): AutismCat#7300
Your SteamID: STEAM_0:0:640887622
Your Server playtime: Almost 48 hours in total. 1 day 23 hours and 51 minutes to be exact as of now.
Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes
Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned and managed by the official DVN account? (Yes/No): Yes
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1J_bfg7ZXb5XfNP9dWa_KIo17T6-IZ-fA/view?usp=share_link
RE: Father Keller's Church - Marzii - 04-27-2023
-1 low player time and backstory could use some improvements.
RE: Father Keller's Church - PlainviewOil - 04-27-2023
(04-27-2023, 08:09 PM)Marzii Wrote: -1 low player time and backstory could use some improvements.pretty sure i had more playtime cause i started a long time ago. its not like i started yesterday but even so 48 hours isnt a low playtime. i know all the bits and bobs already. thx for the comment tho.
RE: Father Keller's Church - CharlesSKS - 04-27-2023
-1 No Marzii is right, 48 hours is considerably low, compared to others who are making applications.
RE: Father Keller's Church - SnowC - 04-27-2023
Applicant's playtime is considerably low BUT I've not ever seen a Cult faction in the server before and this sounds rather intresting
+1
RE: Father Keller's Church - NovaLuna - 04-27-2023
While this sounds like a good idea in theory, you need to roleplay it PERFECTLY for it to work well. Looking at it as it is now, I don't know if you have the ability to do so with your playtime and experience.
To lead a *cult* without it being a mingefest would be difficult, and looking at the backstory, the effort just isn't there for me.
I would have to -1 this as it is now, but I think if you put some serious effort into vamping up the backstory and working out the details and such of the "cult" that it may be a genuinely interesting faction.
RE: Father Keller's Church - Canadian-bacon - 05-01-2023
5 bans over two months, banned a day after posting this application.
Faction leaders are expected to obey the rules.
Father Keller's Church - Canadian-bacon - 05-01-2023
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.