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Legacy Enterprises - Davey - 05-09-2023
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-Name of Faction-
-Name of Faction-
Legacy Enterpises
-Number of Members-
We currently have 11+ people working for Legacy that are committed and work over 5 hours a day to reach legacy's goals, I am confident that once we spread the word about our faction and get it accepted by y’all, we will have plenty of interested individuals eager to join us.
-Type Of Faction-
Legacy Enterprises is a legal faction.
-Ethnic Background-
The primary ethnic backround is african american but this faction would be available to all races.
-Name of Character running the faction-
The main character running the faction will be Dave “Davey” Micheal.
-My Discord Username-
My discord username is as followed Davey#3394.
-My Profile Link-
My profile link is https://steamcommunity.com/id/dylaneatscock/.
-My Server Playtime-
I have been a dedicated player of Mafia RP Gamemode for over four years and have been playing on this server since its launch. With a few weeks of gameplay under my belt.
-Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page?-
I agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page.
-Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned and managed by the DVN account?-
I acknowledge that my factions discord will be owned and managed by the offical DVN account.
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-Organization Backstory And Information-
-Organization Backstory And Information-
[/url][url=https://www.smore.com/5ey0k]— Organization Backstory And Info
-For those who dont feel like reading the whole backstory here is a summary-
-For those who dont feel like reading the whole backstory here is a summary-
Legacy Enterprises is a powerful organization that dominates the New York City streets. Our story is one of struggle, determination, and the pursuit of justice in a system that is against us. We specialize in providing security and offering jobs to the underprivileged in our community, while also providing legal services to those who need it most.
In the first chapter, we dive into the childhood of our leader Davey Michael, a young African American male who grew up in a tough neighborhood in New York City. We see the discrimination and racism he faced on a daily basis and how these experiences shaped him into the man he is today, determined to make a difference in the lives of those around him.
Chapter two tells the story of Davey's time as an NYPD officer and his realization that the system is corrupt and against him. We explore the moment that changed his life forever when he was falsely accused of corruption and criminal negligence by a group of racist civilians and even a few cops. We also see how he teamed up with a young and promising lawyer to fight back against the charges and how this experience led to the creation of Legacy Enterprises.
In the final chapter, we see Davey's rise to power within the organization and the establishment of our bars, casinos, and other ventures. We also explore the legal side jobs we take on to build connections, as well as our occasional dip into illegal activities to make ends meet. Through it all, we see Davey's commitment to his community and his determination to make a better life for himself and those around him.
Join us as we explore the sketchy, and dangerous world of Legacy Enterprises and see how we've become one of the most powerful organizations in the city, providing security, legal services, and job opportunities to those who need it most.
ON HOLD PENDING PK APPEAL
Quote:I would like to take this opportunity to say all I am looking for is a chance to prove that I am capable of owning and running a successful faction. While I understand that some members of the community may hold negative opinions of me, I assure you that I have matured greatly over the years. I am committed to showing my dedication and passion for the server, and I am confident that with the right support, our faction can thrive. Special Thanks to server leadership for giving me a second chance, it is a privilege and its greatly appreciated. Me and my buddies also spent several days creating this and would appreciate any feedback. We appologize in advance if any mispelled words or bad grammer that slipped through.
RE: Legacy Enterprises - Davey - 05-09-2023
I have made a few edits so it doesnt seem we just do bars and casinos because that isnt our intention. Everything in the back story was based off of true in game events here is even the original criminal complaint.
RE: Legacy Enterprises - NovaLuna - 05-09-2023
+1 for backstory quality
+1 for playtime, though it is a little questionable to not just have a straight number
+1 for being something other than an italian mob
-1 for the fact that you're going to base yourself around such a typical concept of casinos and bars, I was pretty hopeful for something much more unique, businesswise
-1 for the fact you have 2 past bans and 2 denied ban appeals
Overall net positive, but I think you need to come up with some more unique ideas of business for your faction
RE: Legacy Enterprises - Davey - 05-09-2023
(05-09-2023, 01:35 PM)NovaLuna Wrote: 1 for backstory qualityThank you for the constructive feedback. I appreciate the positive comments about the backstory and playtime, and I understand your concern about the orgininal concept of casinos and bars. I will take your feedback into account and explore more unique business ideas for my faction to distinguish it from others, we already have many ideas in mind of course as long as we get approved. Like I stated we also do legal side jobs I said this so eventually we can do more then just security detail and run bars and casinos.
1 for playtime, though it is a little questionable to not just have a straight number
1 for being something other than an italian mob
-1 for the fact that you're going to base yourself around such a typical concept of casinos and bars, I was pretty hopeful for something much more unique, businesswise
-1 for the fact you have 2 past bans and 2 denied ban appeals
Overall net positive, but I think you need to come up with some more unique ideas of business for your faction
I also want to note that the bans occurred more than two years ago, which means that I have had plenty of time to reflect on my past behavior and learn from my mistakes. I am committed to following the rules and being a epic member of the community moving forward, and I hope that my past actions do not effect my current efforts to improve and contribute positively to the community.
Thank you again for your feedback, and I will work hard to make my faction stand out and be a valuable addition to the server.
Yes I used the word epic.
RE: Legacy Enterprises - justcallmeryan - 05-14-2023
This comment has been edited, after further checks and consideration of Legacy's backstory, the way it was written, and the people who helped write this story I now believe this to be a rare case where AI checkers are incorrect, with this being proofread by a multitude of individuals which would decrease the randomness if any staff overseeing this would like to know how I came to this conclusion feel free to message me at Justcallmeryan#6682
A legal faction would be a nice addition to the server, especially one that doesn't solely focus on oil and would add nice RP to the server, a change that has been needed for a long time.
+1
RE: Legacy Enterprises - Skyzer - 05-14-2023
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I want to change my rep for this app for a good reason. I personally talked with the members and learned a lot about how the faction made their story. I think people don’t understand how different they wrote their story and ideas. Changing my rep to +1
RE: Legacy Enterprises - Davey - 05-15-2023
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RE: Legacy Enterprises - NovaLuna - 05-15-2023
I have full trust that Davey wrote this himself. Through his interactions with myself and others, I would love to see him as a faction, and I think he has put in the effort necessary to become one.
If he doesn't become official, I will be very sad, as he has the potential.
big ol' +1 from sebustun attocus
RE: Legacy Enterprises - CaptSkull21 - 05-15-2023
+1 the idea is good the Faction leader is a good dude they always rp I think a legal faction would be good to have other than American oil
RE: Legacy Enterprises - DurMattt - 05-15-2023
Great stuff from these fellas, ran into them a couple of times near world corp and the fact that most of the time i see them running together makes them really cool +1 for sure