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+---- Thread: Faction Application (/showthread.php?tid=6128)
Faction Application - 11221212 - 07-06-2023
Name of Faction: Tremblay Family
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Family
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): canadian american
Name of Character running the faction: Robert Giuseppetti
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): funny_fellow
Your SteamID: 76561198284169812
Your Server playtime: 6d 6h
Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): yes
Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned and managed by the official DVN account? (Yes/No): yes
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d6pKiGFE-RS3C3JoGF4mfjCqfwcoaO1sFEUUclbGbpM
RE: Faction Application - Fox - 07-06-2023
+/-
I think this application has some real potential. I think you should break down the segments to tell the story better and go into more detail. Id happily change my +/- to a + if the formatting and overall backstory was beefed out a bit more
Secondly I believe your play time is a little low to be the leader of a faction.
Faction Application - Canadian-bacon - 08-03-2023
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.