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Russian mafia - Amirka2009 - 08-20-2023
Name of Faction: Red Brothers
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): We got 4 for now
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Family
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Russian
Name of Character running the faction: Vladimir Solonik
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210):Ak48#0513
Your SteamID:110030
Your Server playtime: 6 days 23 H
Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes
Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): Yes
Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred): We will cause or try to cause major events in the server by disobeying. the government mabye some kidnappings too
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Uk-vs9s65OPLpSmbWOXOGkFj_UJpQN3smpul0hUYcGE/edit?usp=sharing
RE: Russian mafia - KAMI66 - 08-20-2023
I can't take it anymore
RE: Russian mafia - akimbocross - 08-20-2023
Painfully formulaic and you don't even meet the minimum player count
RE: Russian mafia - Red - 08-28-2023
Good laugh tbf, https://irishwriterscentre.ie/courses/how-to-be-a-comedic-writer/
RE: Russian mafia - Fox - 08-28-2023
-1
- Super low play time
- Member requirement not hit
- Backstory written by AI. Some people spend hours on their backstories and you can't even be bothered to write one out.
Here are some pointers. Do a little research on Bratva and write a compelling backstory by yourself that is original. As well as this, I'd play a lot more and at least reach a made man position, running a faction requires a lot of RP knowledge, that I don't believe you can have with just 6 days of play time.
Russian mafia - Canadian-bacon - 09-14-2023
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.