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The Ωlympus Family - jvvvck - 10-19-2023
Name of Faction: The Ωlympus Family
Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 14
Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Family
Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): African
Name of Character running the faction: Antony Pallipet
Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): jimbo_is_toxic
Your SteamID: STEAM_0:0:641257415
Your Server playtime: 13h
Do you acknowledge and agree to all faction rules as detailed on the server rules page? (Yes/No): Yes
Do you acknowledge that your faction discord will be owned by us? (Yes/No): Yes
Provide an example of the unique Roleplay your faction will bring to the server/what type of roleplay we can expect from your faction (Images/Videos Preferred):
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1106688336812318872/1163944654107054204/retard_1.mp4?ex=65416aee&is=652ef5ee&hm=1c61548fa9e3e5cf0a9f370db1c82bce637a5c09b1ff602fcc545d2f72a35fcb&;
Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images): The Olympus family hailed from the verdant plains of the Kingdom of Dahomey, a land steeped in rich cultural traditions and ancient wisdom. At the heart of this noble lineage was Jimbo, a man of quiet strength and boundless love for his family.
In the cruel grip of the transatlantic slave trade, tragedy befell the Olympus clan. They were forcibly torn from their ancestral home, their laughter drowned by the wailing of the wind as they boarded a wretched slave ship. Alongside Jimbo were his sons, Antony and Jasper, their spirits unyielding despite the chains that bound them.
Arriving in the New World, the family was sundered, each member sold to different plantations. Jimbo, though physically distant, remained steadfast in his resolve to reunite his fractured family. Antony, inheriting his father's unwavering spirit, emerged as a beacon of hope amidst the brutality of the plantation. His wisdom and resilience garnered the respect of his fellow enslaved, providing a semblance of solace in their shared struggle.
Jasper, the youngest, possessed an insatiable thirst for knowledge. In the shadows of the night, he covertly learned to read and write, defying the oppressive forces that sought to suppress his intellect. With each stolen moment of education, he illuminated the minds of his fellow enslaved, igniting the flames of knowledge amidst their darkness.
Through whispered promises and shared dreams of freedom, the Olympus family endured. They clung to their names, their traditions, and their vision of a future untethered by chains. Their story, etched in the tapestry of history, stands as a testament to the unbreakable bonds of family, the resilience of the human spirit, and the enduring power of hope.
One moonlit night, Antony heard of a secret gathering. There, under the ancient oak, he found Jasper, his long-lost brother. Tears flowed, their hearts rejoiced.
Meanwhile, their father Jimbo, driven by a newfound determination, embarked on a perilous journey. Months later, their paths converged on the outskirts of a neighboring plantation. The Olympus family, torn apart by slavery, was whole again. Their embrace spoke of enduring love and the promise of a better future.
RE: The Ωlympus Family - Fox - 10-19-2023
-1
Not a bad application by any means, just some constructive criticism. I'd personally work on your application and play more in different families, work your way up so you know what will be required of you when running a faction.
Pros:
-Nicely written, for what is there.
-Diversity.
Cons:
-Nowhere near enough play time to know the ins and outs of running a successful faction.
-I feel like the story, while well written, could be expanded upon greatly. I'd read some approved applications and build on this.
-Dislike that you attached a totally irrelevant clip, it actually makes you look not serious about your application.
-Already a collective group called Olympus.
RE: The Ωlympus Family - RyanBateman888 - 10-19-2023
-1 There is already a group named Olympus.
I'm laughing out loud though still, hahahaha.
RE: The Ωlympus Family - Eospin - 10-20-2023
-1 a group named olympus exists, also very low play time
RE: The Ωlympus Family - Red - 10-22-2023
-1, lack of experiencce in mafiarp and a poor application overall
RE: The Ωlympus Family - VirologicZero - 10-24-2023
-1 Lack of play time, albeit well written the story doesnt make sense. why is a slave from a country that didn't exist in 1987 showing up now? FailRP.
RE: The Ωlympus Family - Marzii - 10-25-2023
-1 too low of playtime, terrible rp’er
RE: The Ωlympus Family - ThatBananaguy - 10-26-2023
-1 reasons above
RE: The Ωlympus Family - Tiby Tobino - 11-04-2023
-1 retarded
The Ωlympus Family - Canadian-bacon - 11-06-2023
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.