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Venetti Crime Family Faction Application
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#1
12-12-2021, 04:00 AM
Name of Faction: Venetti Crime Family

Number of Members (Minimum of 5):11

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc):Family

Ethnic Background (Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc):Italian

Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210):[color=var(--text-normal)][color=var(--header-primary)]FatIndividule [/color][color=var(--header-secondary)]#7038[/color][/color]

Your SteamID:STEAM_0:0:176674518

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Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words & any images):The Venettis were started in January of 1923 when prohibition was in its midst and a group of low level gangsters started getting cash slowing in from smuggling liquor in from Canada and slowly grew there way up they were specially known to other gangs for there torture method the Venetti special where they would screw in screws through a persons toe into concrete and throw them in a river to die. But once prohibition ended they had to find a new business and that was weapon smuggling and with there big knolage of guns they grew up in the organized crime food chain and became the Venetti crime family. As the Venettis grew bigger they needed another business and once the 70s hit with the popularity of crystal meth they went to that and now the Venettis are one of the biggest weapon and crystal dealers in the upper east cost
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#2
12-12-2021, 04:25 AM
-1 this doesn’t seem like a good app at all
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12-12-2021, 05:46 AM
It is a good crime Family that brings RP with 15 people in in the will switch over servers and bring more people to yours and get some people in it and grow your community.
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#4
12-12-2021, 10:07 AM
-1 we don’t need more Italians, especially with an application that lacks much to be desired
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#5
12-24-2021, 01:54 PM
- 1 Application backstory feels more like a summarization than a proper backstory of a crime family.
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12-24-2021, 04:52 PM
(12-12-2021, 05:46 AM)Vin Vinetti Wrote: It is a good crime Family that brings RP with 15 people in in the will switch over servers and bring more people to yours and get some people in it and grow your community.
 what?


-1 Sorry but we have shit tons of italians around, plus the application could be better
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01-15-2022, 06:41 PM
+1 there is still an empty space for a fifth Italian family in the city I see no reason not to give them a shot just because they didn't want to put a lot of effort into a backstory no one will read even if they did put in the effort they just check to see if it's long enough. You never needed a backstory in the old days of mafia rp just the player base to back it up. If they turn out to be minges or a problem there have been plenty of instances where those things immediately get nipped in the bud. Still recommend you add more onto your backstory though just to please the masses
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#8
01-17-2022, 08:38 AM
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More details. Bigger backstory. This seems somehow worse than the generic Italian family background.

Put more effort into it. Or just don't be Italian.
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#9
01-17-2022, 11:11 AM
-1
We already have 4 spaghetti families. This seems like an unoriginal one, The backstory is ass
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01-22-2022, 04:55 AM (This post was last modified: 01-22-2022, 04:55 AM by Canadian-bacon.)
Low activity. Background does not meet word requirement.

Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.

We do not believe your faction or application is suffcient enough to be accepted.

You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.
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