UNITED HOBO fraction application

[Michael Jones]

Name of Faction:UNITED HOBOS

Number of Members(Minimum of 5):5

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc):Family of Hobos

Ethnic Background (Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc):Americans Hobos

Your Discord # (ex: Calloway#4110):ThatOneDude#4553

Organization Backstory (Min. of 150+ Words):
We are homeless poor got no food to eat but still, we want to live life like those rich people in tuxedo. society has been neglecting us for years we get pushed away by all the rich and high society people we were getting tired of this. One day our beloved hobo friend
Smith john got hit by a rich guy car and died we made a report in the PD we asked for justice but they were rich powerful and we were homeless hobos so they got away with our friend's murder at that point we understood how weak we are we were so angry. On our way to home Michael jones (Family leader) asked us "do you guys want to die the same way our friend died" we said "no" then Michael jones said "grab anything u guys got" we asked "why" Michael jones said "to bring justice for our friend" we grabbed a wooden bat and Michael jones lead us to the guy house who killed our friend we went inside and savagely killed the guy we beat that guy painfully to the death we felt relieved but next day the PD found out that we killed the guy the PD was after us they want to kill us but Michael jones had a plan he said "not this time" he gathered hobos from around all the city and made a Criminal Family in 1975 to survive and to live a life like those rich people in tuxedo. We want society and the government to fear us. We want society to know how strong we are what we are capable of. We want to become strong. We make and sell all kinds of drugs.PD from this day hasn't been able to capture Michael jones and his gang PD are still looking for Michael Jones and his gang.

[ZOOMER]

Copy of things to note:

- I feel the story and name of the faction itself somewhat contradictory. Mainly the fact that technically speaking making money of drug manufacturing means that the "hobos" in question possesses the funds to make a stable cash flow thus rendering them not hobos........???
- Despite meeting the word count, the backstory of "United Hobos" is somewhat lackluster.
- The whole vibe of the backstory kinda feels like the SPK, which is something that a lot of the playerbase dislike.

This is my take on the application at its current state as of writing.

[Somespy]

-1 not a fan of the name and the faction just seems like a contradiction of itself.

[Michael Jones]

-1 not a fan of the name and the faction just seems like a contradiction of itself.

but come on the story is very good and the name is og i came up with the story and the name by my self .Also u can't disagree the story and the name is very good for RP. I know the name sound kinda minge but the story is very deep and good. also united hobo is the best name that goes along with the story

[Canadian-bacon]

Thank you for your interest however this application is unfortunately Denied.