11-30-2022, 05:43 PM
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I like the idea but this was brought about poorly, and let me tell you why.
I like the idea but this was brought about poorly, and let me tell you why.
- First off you spelled disciples as "Deciples"
- Your backstory is way too short because it barely explain the come up for the MC. The majority of the backstory is about your gang raping a white woman
