Velentzas Crime Family

**Marzii**

(12-17-2022, 06:51 PM)Damiano Wrote: -1 This faction previously existed and couped itself out of existence while i was HC in it and had 10+ people online at times. There would be 0 RP reason given your backstory for its return and all of these new players +1 ing must not have been around when that happened. Also you assume you wlll have access to firearms and a gambling racket in your backstory showing a lot of inexperience. This would be the same as allowing Lucchese Hells angels or carter inc return because a hivemind of new players +1 an app for a faction they plan to be in with no reason. Especially since none of you can write more than a sentence about why a dead faction should resurrect. Leave it rotting in the ground. ( change the name and backstory and it would be a good idea, your low playtime is evident with this one)

there was a faction app that got sent of the same name but it got denied

(12-17-2022, 06:53 PM)Infamy Wrote: -1

First and foremost the backstory is kinda off. And here's why...

You cannot bring gambling tables into Southside due to the soul fact that there is no licenses open.

Same thing as above but with the Rackets you explained to be brung into by yourself.

If you were thinking about being ran on southside you would measure in that you'd have 0 allies due to the soul fact that Luchesse is ☠️

Lastly the pictures don't add up. You got the Chicago Outfit, a Gambino Family Boss, A newspaper article of the Gambino Boss in the picture before threatening to kill the leader & several other random pictures that may or may not even have a greek ethnicity or any relation to Velentzas at all.

The lore should be a build up, not what "they" had its about what they want to achieve and how they want to go about going into Southside or Union City. Cant big dick at the beginning and say this, that and the other thing because that's how factions get deleted in their first few months. Now my -1 can become neutral or even a +1 but there's my stance on it.

it's just a backstory of the faction, were planning on making allies and growing. Also there's already gambling tables in the server.