Rivais Mortos Crime Family

[Yuki]

+1 very solid back story and these dudes seem to have a great head on their shoulders. I'd be interested to see how this goes about. Much like many others, they seem to want a bit more diversity in the city.

I believe the responses to the guy that corrected all of the grammar in the original story was just a natural response. I don't think it should be taken into account in the final decision on the application.

I mean if someone has an outburst and does something like that to an correction I wouldn't say that's the type of person who's high up in leading a group would you want someone irrational and prone to outburst in a position of power but that's just me it seems