Rivais Mortos Crime Family

[Mascotics]

+1 very solid back story and these dudes seem to have a great head on their shoulders. I'd be interested to see how this goes about. Much like many others, they seem to want a bit more diversity in the city.

I believe the responses to the guy that corrected all of the grammar in the original story was just a natural response. I don't think it should be taken into account in the final decision on the application.

I mean if someone has an outburst and does something like that to an correction I wouldn't say that's the type of person who's high up in leading a group would you want someone irrational and prone to outburst in a position of power but that's just me it seems

In all fairness, if you sat down and critiqued something of mine that closely for something other than a University English class, I'd probably be a little irritated at it as well. I mean, at the end of the day, it's a video game. He took the time to correct it and seek out further opinions on the concept. Seems like a decent fella to me.