08-12-2023, 07:35 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-12-2023, 07:43 PM by Outkast. Edited 1 time in total.)
+1 Originality is very important when you are creating not the faction itself but the idea behind it. I've fully read through the backstory and I will say that generally speaking, the quality and originality of the story surprised me overall. I do think that this would be a good addition to the server because in my time playing, I've never seen a faction like this. I do think you could've incorporated the drugs aspect to give it more sense overall, but generally this sounds and looks like a good faction. Just take don't the opportunity you may be given for granted if this is accepted, what I mean by this is don't become a minge faction. Especially regarding the connection Eazy-E has to crips. Also to anyone who reads this faction app, please do not take what I'm saying to twist my words to negatively reply, just on the basis of very simple connections that a person whos not even on the server, just in the backstory has to the crips, or the basic chance all factions have to become a minge faction just on the basis of how past black factions have gone before
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