03-03-2021, 06:43 PM
Copy of things to note:
- I feel the story and name of the faction itself somewhat contradictory. Mainly the fact that technically speaking making money of drug manufacturing means that the "hobos" in question possesses the funds to make a stable cash flow thus rendering them not hobos........???
- Despite meeting the word count, the backstory of "United Hobos" is somewhat lackluster.
- The whole vibe of the backstory kinda feels like the SPK, which is something that a lot of the playerbase dislike.
This is my take on the application at its current state as of writing.
- I feel the story and name of the faction itself somewhat contradictory. Mainly the fact that technically speaking making money of drug manufacturing means that the "hobos" in question possesses the funds to make a stable cash flow thus rendering them not hobos........???
- Despite meeting the word count, the backstory of "United Hobos" is somewhat lackluster.
- The whole vibe of the backstory kinda feels like the SPK, which is something that a lot of the playerbase dislike.
This is my take on the application at its current state as of writing.
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