03-23-2024, 10:54 PM
+1 - Generally, a good application that's something a little different and has potential.
PRO
- Diversity
- Backstory is well thought out and there is potential to create RP from it
- Well written and enjoyable read
- I quite like the 'cult' aspect of it
CON
- Low playtime
- Although I enjoy the 'cult' aspect of your faction app, I'd be worried that this will end up struggling with the 'Mafia' aspect of the servers design, and you will fall into the same traps as other factions of being mundane and unoriginal, but if you can push the RP of it - it would be fun.
PRO
- Diversity
- Backstory is well thought out and there is potential to create RP from it
- Well written and enjoyable read
- I quite like the 'cult' aspect of it
CON
- Low playtime
- Although I enjoy the 'cult' aspect of your faction app, I'd be worried that this will end up struggling with the 'Mafia' aspect of the servers design, and you will fall into the same traps as other factions of being mundane and unoriginal, but if you can push the RP of it - it would be fun.
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