Walk Down Gang

[Rae2quick]

-1 he’s not capable of being a faction leader very immature and during the cartel war while being in KTS was guarding his boss on alt characters and when caught by UA aka verax and even told by his boss to get on his main war char said no leading to his char being pked anyway has no respect for rules and just wants to be able to rob and minge with a faction name

[[Chino]Major Payne]

+1 Awesome Backstory +1 Go Blue Writing 

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+1 Awesome Backstory +1 Go Blue Writing

[CharlesSKS]

-1 This ain't it

[ZER0LIVEZ0]

+1 cool guy

[Duggar]

+! good guys

[Quartz]

+1, great guys and good backstory. also a good idea

[maudicus]

+1 very nice backstory

[Saul White]

yes +1

[Mascotics]

-1

While I feel this gang of Crips essentially would be a good idea, I'm just not sure if this is the right way to do it. The back story is pretty poorly written and a lot of run-on sentences and grammatical issues. There's also the thought, in the back of my head, as I read the story that this was just a minge faction that's out to mug and rob people. Maybe I am wrong on that assessment, but even at the end, I still felt the same way. There's also an issue with the way the war was handled by the proposed Faction Leader.

[Lordskips]

-1

While I feel this gang of Crips essentially would be a good idea, I'm just not sure if this is the right way to do it. The back story is pretty poorly written and a lot of run-on sentences and grammatical issues. There's also the thought, in the back of my head, as I read the story that this was just a minge faction that's out to mug and rob people. Maybe I am wrong on that assessment, but even at the end, I still felt the same way. There's also an issue with the way the war was handled by the proposed Faction Leader.

idk where you got crips from reading that backstory and robbing is apart of street gang rp its not really mingey its just looked down on