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[Mr Bruno]

Delete

[Julius]

-1

I find the backstory lacking, and it is not a very pretty application.
Also, this isn't the original Velentzas is it?

[wavychato]

-1 would love to see more greek factions just don't like the fact that this factions uses velentzas

[McDouble]

+1 good backstory. As a note for anyone reading: Velentzas is the actual name of a former Greek mob organization, and the Velentzas on this server were nowhere near influential enough to claim that name (I would understand if someone was angry about using the Flanagan name in a new faction, for instance.)

[Julius]

+1 good backstory. As a note for anyone reading: Velentzas is the actual name of a former Greek mob organization, and the Velentzas on this server were nowhere near influential enough to claim that name (I would understand if someone was angry about using the Flanagan name in a new faction, for instance.)

I think most of us know that. Using a name from before is bad enough.

I am also pretty damn sure that this isn't the faction that is gonna put the Velentzas name up there.

[Infamy]

-1

To begin with, despite the fact you were in the original Velentzas, you didn't use any actual lore. You know everything about the previous Velentzas but decided to create a clean slate and forget everything the previous dons and high command did on the server. I have plenty of time and relation with you, but you'd be a garbage faction leader. As a soldier in my crew in Velentzas, you could barely crackdown on kick-ups and had trash leadership compared to the other soldier's reasoning on why you were never made High Command.

I, as a person, do not believe you are fit to become a faction leader, you stated you had 5 members but have 2 actual faction members and 5 total people in your discord. 2 of which are previous Velentzas HC who want nothing to do with it, and then a "made man" and yourself. You have currently 2 faction members.

[Fearsome]

Probably should of had some more prep before making the app...

[steviefiasco]

+1 i think this faction would grow to be huge

[Ricky]

-1 this seems like a mockery to the original velentzas that was on this server prior, the backstory has literally no alignment with any past velentzas history and seems like a big fuck you to the previous faction which you were apart of, I will change my -1 to a neutral if you consider changing the faction name to something different and cut ties with velentzas name in this faction as i think it could be a good faction but should break off into it's own.

[Regan]

Neut the ral