OPM Industries Application

**MxR** · 03-24-2023, 05:54 PM

-1 cool guy and all, and cool concept. But the backstory isnt sufficient.

**NovaLuna** · 03-25-2023, 01:14 AM

(03-24-2023, 05:54 PM)MxR Wrote: -1 cool guy and all, and cool concept. But the backstory isnt sufficient.

Hey MxR! I wanted to thank you for your feedback. I have been considering updating the backstory myself actually, as when I submitted it, my management team hadn't yet figured out their names/stories and so there wasn't much outside my own character to add. I will probably update it sometime soon here, but if you have any more feedback on what you think would be beneficial to the story, please do let me know!

**Voyles** · 03-25-2023, 10:43 PM

+1 Good story but could be more in-depth, something more than just greed and making money. I hope to see some good rp from yall if this gets accepted

**NovaLuna**

Just a quick heads up to anyone reading the backstory right now-- I have a large portion I am adding that is under construction. I am very tired, so I am going to be leaving it half finished for tonight, but there is a notice posted on the section, so hopefully there is no confusion.

EDIT: Just waiting on some in-game screen shots to be able to declare the section finished. For all intents and purposes, the section is complete.

**Sowggy** · 03-30-2023, 03:01 AM

+1 Something new can never be against that I like it and hope to see it in the future

**justcallmeryan**

+1 Great idea, the leader is a great rp'er, would love to see this come to fruition !

**DAWWG** · 03-30-2023, 03:09 AM

+1 This will be a great addition to the city. Let 'em in!

**4Lights** · 03-30-2023, 03:35 AM

+1 Some good guys here. They have Kevo.

**JetBoi5552** · 03-30-2023, 08:35 PM

+ 1
I honestly like the idea of an international faction, and the backstory is pretty interesting.

**Viral** · 03-31-2023, 11:25 PM

Love the idea +1