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RE: segadores cartel - Mascotics - 12-02-2022
There are a decent amount of holes in your back story, it's poorly written with bad grammar, and it's a cartel.
-1 from me.
RE: segadores cartel - maudicus - 12-09-2022
Sorry to nit pick but very bad grammer.
-1
RE: segadores cartel - Canadian-bacon - 12-16-2022
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segadores cartel - Canadian-bacon - 12-16-2022
Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.
We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.
You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.