Faction Application

**Oryn**

Name of Faction: Red Right Hand

Number of Members (Minimum of 5): 5

Type Of Faction (Family, Triad, Street Gang, etc): Bratva

Ethnic Background (ex: Italian, Greek, African American, Irish, etc): Russian

Server Preference (Miami or New York): Miami

Your Discord # (ex: gamer#4210): Oryn#1751

Your SteamID: STEAM_0:1:48783045

Your Server playtime: 1 Day and 22 hours

Your Faction Discord link (If you have one): https://discord.gg/8BaUUPBMrB

Organization Backstory (Min. of 250+ Words) : https://docs.google.com/document/d/17QeI...sp=sharing

**Lammy** · 03-26-2022, 03:03 AM

-1/+1, Neutral. Backstory is okay. But it needs to be a bit more expanded. Just work on the backstory.

**Vex** · 03-26-2022, 03:37 AM

-1

The overall application is lacking creativity/effort. The idea for the faction is not really ideal, especially for this genre.

**mugzalot** · 03-26-2022, 03:20 PM

Neutral

With the updated backstory it sounds interesting but the lack of play time impacts the chance of this faction Succeeding, Especially in Miami if you dont already have some money saved up for auctions or to even purchase flat out properties from other people etc. As an Ex Co-Leader of Solonski Bratva I would like to see another Russian Mob around but the pressure of running one is high.

**TheDroppedFry**

+/-1, I'll hold my opinion for now, would like to see current members contribute to the server RP-wise first.

**catgoku22** · 03-27-2022, 07:28 AM

+1 could use a better backstory and more effort, but a bratva is a good addition to the server

**kash** · 03-28-2022, 06:43 AM

-1

same thing stretch/vex said

**Oryn** · 03-28-2022, 02:13 PM

(03-26-2022, 03:37 AM)Vex Wrote: -1

The overall application is lacking creativity/effort. The idea for the faction is not really ideal, especially for this genre.

I will admit I did rush through this and I will completely revise the story in a more appropriate fashion and I’m disappointed in myself for not throughout thinking the story through the next revision will be better to understand and I will put more effort into it!

**Canadian-bacon** · (This post was last modified: 04-06-2022, 06:16 PM by Canadian-bacon.)

Doesn't seem unique and user has been inactive for a week+

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