13th street mob

[Fox]

-1 short back story, not very original, multiple applications.

I also think from the comments you're more interested in making money rather than the actual roleplay, which kinda shows in your backstory, also.

[Marzii]

-1 low playtime and just no

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-1 low playtime and just no

okay i didn't mean to post it again but look all i want is to be able to get shipments, y'all complain about the backstory like this is english class and it's not, and sure maybe my hours are low but i also work and do other things besides sit on my ass and play the game all day being a keyboard warrior

Faction owner really shouldn't be applying for a faction with low playtime like that. Neither should his intents be "to get shipments". Then also reply in a passive aggressive way when his hours are brought up.

then what should my intentions be besides getting money

If your intensions are to get money then just join a faction the only difference between being the don and being in one is paying kickups and being bossed around. Silly to make a faction for the reasoning of "getting money"

[Canadian-bacon]

Thank you for applying for a faction.
Unfortunately your application has been denied.

We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.

You may re-apply with the above issues rectified, when re-applying keep in mind that a well written application with good grammar, and a detailed backstory will help in getting accepted.