segadores cartel

[Mascotics]

There are a decent amount of holes in your back story, it's poorly written with bad grammar, and it's a cartel.

-1 from me.

[maudicus]

Sorry to nit pick but very bad grammer.
-1

[Canadian-bacon]

inactive

[Canadian-bacon]

Thank you for applying for a faction.
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We do not believe your faction or application is sufficient enough to be accepted.

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