03-28-2022, 02:13 PM
(03-26-2022, 03:37 AM)Vex Wrote: -1
The overall application is lacking creativity/effort. The idea for the faction is not really ideal, especially for this genre.
I will admit I did rush through this and I will completely revise the story in a more appropriate fashion and I’m disappointed in myself for not throughout thinking the story through the next revision will be better to understand and I will put more effort into it!