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too many Italian crime families already
The story is bland and just feels like a normal "started from the dirt" sob story. You need something to set you apart from all the other crime factions that happen to be Italian. What sets you apart from all the other crime factions that harbor tons of Italian American racketeers? There needs to be something that sets you apart from the other crime factions. If you're only going to traffick cocaine and run a car business it only makes you similar to all the other mafias that offer little to no RP experience and just sit around their hotel room outside doing absolutely nothing until they get paid or AFK all day. Even now I do not see RP experience coming from the current active factions who just stand around outside their business doing absolutely nothing and talking trash to those who walk by in a token Italian American accent. I don't mean any offense but I just find the concept of this faction too bland, too cookie-cutter for it to come to fruition. For your labor to bear fruit, you must set yourself apart by actively engaging in RP situations that don't exactly bring you any financial gain, you gotta make yourself look like real tough shit first before first than anything. You gotta have a fair amount of material to work with as well and not just a sob story. Do something an actual crime family would do. Have deeper connections with the government, other mafias, get risky, start REAL trouble, MAKE people wanna join you instead of asking to recruit people. Make yourself look like a prestigious faction. Once you do get a faction approved try encouraging group events, shit that makes you look good, ya know? But aside from that, that's all the constructive criticism I've got.
It's fucked up what they doing to yall. I ain't even gonna hold you for that bro it be fucked up what they doing to y'all. you probably had the full wash and set if they didn't cut yo shit bro but fuck it man it's your life.