Moriando family

[Ray]

-1

It's not a bad application it just seems a little generic, I think the RP 'mission' is a bit unrelated.

I also gave -1 as there is plenty of Italian factions that have been operating for a long time so another one seems overkill.

You also kinda softly state that your illegal racket is either LSD or Cocaine which you aren't forced to be given if accepted.


Thank you for the feedback i will graciously use it if this applications is denied. I do however disagree that the mission is unrelated and I do feel it should be necessary that families lay these out before their faction is made as too many families sit around and do not create any engaging or meaningful RP scenarios for new players to participate in. Me stating our mission is me promising the server that the Moriando family will have an impact on the server’s RP quality. 

I said cocaine and LSD in the backstory not as a saying that’s what i want, i just included those two to make the backstory more interesting as it sounds better than just saying “drugs”. But i do understand why you said that in the end.