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Diverge Networks 1980s Mafia Roleplay Faction Applications Denied Grimsrud Crime Family

Grimsrud Crime Family
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#5
03-04-2023, 02:41 PM
-1

I think diversity is good for faction applications but as stated previously, the story is quite difficult to read. I think in the story, you've tried to pad it out as much as possible but without offering any substance to it. I think you have some good ideas but it needs to be re-visted. If you went back and rewrote the story using the one you have now as a guide I'd be tempted to change my post to a +1 for sure
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Grimsrud Crime Family - by Zane - 03-03-2023, 11:26 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by CaptSkull21 - 03-03-2023, 11:43 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by NovaLuna - 03-04-2023, 01:52 AM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Eospin - 03-04-2023, 05:42 AM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Fox - 03-04-2023, 02:41 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by DuckVader - 03-04-2023, 10:50 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Diego Sanchez - 03-04-2023, 10:52 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by sniperfury101 - 03-05-2023, 12:08 AM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by MrBurntToastt - 03-05-2023, 02:15 AM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Seansx - 03-05-2023, 04:24 AM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by buzn - 03-05-2023, 05:51 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Superduper372 - 03-06-2023, 06:56 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Bravo - 03-07-2023, 08:48 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Upir - 03-08-2023, 01:20 AM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Pro31480 - 03-08-2023, 01:34 AM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Guitar Guy - 03-08-2023, 03:31 PM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by CharlesSKS - 03-11-2023, 09:39 AM
RE: Grimsrud Crime Family - by Scar - 03-27-2023, 01:25 PM
Grimsrud Crime Family - by Pendred - 04-24-2023, 01:50 AM

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