03-24-2023, 08:44 PM
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So you list it as British, but it’s founded by a bunch of Italian Americans?
Also, the backstory is flat out unoriginal, no offense. “A violent Italian cartel” is as basic as it gets, and even then you didn’t put in the real effort that would make it remotely considerable. If you are genuinely interested in creating a faction, rethink your story and origins, with a more unique idea. Use a google document instead of the forum, and link to it. Format, spellcheck, and spice it up with some images and formatting. As it is now, this is a very poorly done application.
(Forgive MY formatting, as I am on mobile.)
So you list it as British, but it’s founded by a bunch of Italian Americans?
Also, the backstory is flat out unoriginal, no offense. “A violent Italian cartel” is as basic as it gets, and even then you didn’t put in the real effort that would make it remotely considerable. If you are genuinely interested in creating a faction, rethink your story and origins, with a more unique idea. Use a google document instead of the forum, and link to it. Format, spellcheck, and spice it up with some images and formatting. As it is now, this is a very poorly done application.
(Forgive MY formatting, as I am on mobile.)