+1 for backstory quality
+1 for playtime, though it is a little questionable to not just have a straight number
+1 for being something other than an italian mob
-1 for the fact that you're going to base yourself around such a typical concept of casinos and bars, I was pretty hopeful for something much more unique, businesswise
-1 for the fact you have 2 past bans and 2 denied ban appeals
Overall net positive, but I think you need to come up with some more unique ideas of business for your faction
+1 for playtime, though it is a little questionable to not just have a straight number
+1 for being something other than an italian mob
-1 for the fact that you're going to base yourself around such a typical concept of casinos and bars, I was pretty hopeful for something much more unique, businesswise
-1 for the fact you have 2 past bans and 2 denied ban appeals
Overall net positive, but I think you need to come up with some more unique ideas of business for your faction
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