05-09-2023, 02:30 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-12-2023, 01:10 PM by Davey. Edited 10 times in total.)
(05-09-2023, 01:35 PM)NovaLuna Wrote: 1 for backstory qualityThank you for the constructive feedback. I appreciate the positive comments about the backstory and playtime, and I understand your concern about the orgininal concept of casinos and bars. I will take your feedback into account and explore more unique business ideas for my faction to distinguish it from others, we already have many ideas in mind of course as long as we get approved. Like I stated we also do legal side jobs I said this so eventually we can do more then just security detail and run bars and casinos.
1 for playtime, though it is a little questionable to not just have a straight number
1 for being something other than an italian mob
-1 for the fact that you're going to base yourself around such a typical concept of casinos and bars, I was pretty hopeful for something much more unique, businesswise
-1 for the fact you have 2 past bans and 2 denied ban appeals
Overall net positive, but I think you need to come up with some more unique ideas of business for your faction
I also want to note that the bans occurred more than two years ago, which means that I have had plenty of time to reflect on my past behavior and learn from my mistakes. I am committed to following the rules and being a epic member of the community moving forward, and I hope that my past actions do not effect my current efforts to improve and contribute positively to the community.
Thank you again for your feedback, and I will work hard to make my faction stand out and be a valuable addition to the server.
Yes I used the word epic.