09-01-2023, 05:43 PM
Soft +1 bordering on +/-
Not a bad application by any means. I think you've got a strong base and you've connected your backstory to some of your members which is great. I also like that you're Australian for the diversity.
My only issue is text layout mainly. It's not required to use a google doc but I think it may benefit you if you put your information in there, broke up the paragraphs and potentially added some images - it would make it that little bit easier to read.
But, yah good luck! you've definitely got something going here.
Not a bad application by any means. I think you've got a strong base and you've connected your backstory to some of your members which is great. I also like that you're Australian for the diversity.
My only issue is text layout mainly. It's not required to use a google doc but I think it may benefit you if you put your information in there, broke up the paragraphs and potentially added some images - it would make it that little bit easier to read.
But, yah good luck! you've definitely got something going here.
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