10-17-2023, 07:16 PM
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- Not enough play time to be leading a faction
- Peaky Blinders is over done and kind of an expectation...
- The backstory is a little unoriginal.
Take my comments as constructive criticism, i'd come up with a new idea - maybe use this application as a base and go from there. I don't think a Peaky Blinders style faction would get approved, personally.
Good luck with your application, however.
- Not enough play time to be leading a faction
- Peaky Blinders is over done and kind of an expectation...
- The backstory is a little unoriginal.
Take my comments as constructive criticism, i'd come up with a new idea - maybe use this application as a base and go from there. I don't think a Peaky Blinders style faction would get approved, personally.
Good luck with your application, however.
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