02-07-2024, 08:02 AM
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Pros
- Decent enough app. I know the meta is to post into a google doc which isn't always necessary, I do believe it could've benefited your app in this case.
- Good ideas for cultural style of events, and RP.
Cons
- Not enough play time, with 5d of play time, I personally don't think you're ready to spearhead a faction. It takes a lot of responsibility and I think maybe some more playtime in other factions would help you
- Backstory lacks a bit, you talk a lot about what you will do if your faction was added to the city, but not enough about the backstory of your faction. In your backstory part you mention Mr. Ramadani 9 times and Mr. Rudaj 12 times, it starts to become very illegible.
Pros
- Decent enough app. I know the meta is to post into a google doc which isn't always necessary, I do believe it could've benefited your app in this case.
- Good ideas for cultural style of events, and RP.
Cons
- Not enough play time, with 5d of play time, I personally don't think you're ready to spearhead a faction. It takes a lot of responsibility and I think maybe some more playtime in other factions would help you
- Backstory lacks a bit, you talk a lot about what you will do if your faction was added to the city, but not enough about the backstory of your faction. In your backstory part you mention Mr. Ramadani 9 times and Mr. Rudaj 12 times, it starts to become very illegible.
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