03-28-2021, 03:20 PM
(This post was last modified: 03-28-2021, 03:24 PM by wackyTiger.)
Terrible faction application. It included the following:
- Terrible backstory that makes no sense
- Horrific grammatical errors
- No true reason for them to be a crime family other than “they just are”
- Only has 3 members even though 5 members are the minimum to apply as a faction
- Someone already owns the church, meaning no one else is allowed to declare it is theirs
- Your faction backstory doesn’t explain why they do gun racketeering or how they obtained the “A grade” weapons
- Your application, mainly the backstory, has little to no detail.
I don’t care about the “roleplay possibilities” your faction can have. Gun racketeering is REALLY boring, trust me I did it in another faction.
-1
- Terrible backstory that makes no sense
- Horrific grammatical errors
- No true reason for them to be a crime family other than “they just are”
- Only has 3 members even though 5 members are the minimum to apply as a faction
- Someone already owns the church, meaning no one else is allowed to declare it is theirs
- Your faction backstory doesn’t explain why they do gun racketeering or how they obtained the “A grade” weapons
- Your application, mainly the backstory, has little to no detail.
I don’t care about the “roleplay possibilities” your faction can have. Gun racketeering is REALLY boring, trust me I did it in another faction.
-1