03-31-2021, 10:38 AM
this has great potential , Your backstory has been well written in detail, Your information on your characters helps see the family in a bright picture, great job charlies garity
-Gopnik
-Gopnik
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The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by Charlies Garity - 03-30-2021, 09:11 AM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by wackyTiger - 03-30-2021, 04:22 PM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by Charlies Garity - 03-30-2021, 10:33 PM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by tony debonis - 03-31-2021, 10:38 AM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by JimmyPenis - 03-31-2021, 09:13 PM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by Charlies Garity - 04-01-2021, 04:13 AM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by Rem - 04-05-2021, 07:59 PM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by Baljeet BipBop - 04-06-2021, 02:58 AM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by Cypher1357 - 04-06-2021, 06:09 AM
RE: The Garity Crime Syndicate (Returning-App) - by Canadian-bacon - 04-06-2021, 06:31 PM
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