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This is half of the application. Use the correct format.
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As you did update your application, I cannot say it's good. As we gain more staff, we need to be cautious on who we choose. I can easily spot a few mistakes and this app does not look like it was reviewed well. Based off the app, I cannot give you a +1 because the impression I get from this application just makes you seem the opposite of 'staff material'.
This is half of the application. Use the correct format.
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As you did update your application, I cannot say it's good. As we gain more staff, we need to be cautious on who we choose. I can easily spot a few mistakes and this app does not look like it was reviewed well. Based off the app, I cannot give you a +1 because the impression I get from this application just makes you seem the opposite of 'staff material'.